Which sentence would work better as a thesis statement for a 2-5 page college paper?
The sex pistols could not have succeeded without singer and lyricist Johnny Rotten, who provided the stage presence, poetry, and authentic working-class rage that galvanized the group’s young English audiences.
Or
The sex pistols were popular with young English audiences, and the singer and lyricist Johnny Rotten was very important to their success.
Help!! thesis statements?
I would go with the second statement, unless the paper is an opinion based paper. I do not know anything about the group you are speaking of, but I have always been taught in college courses that the thesis statement much be fact-and not opinion. Good luck on your paper-I need to go start mine on the Roman Pantheon!
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